Kia Ora Susana, My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey, it is awesome to see your first post of the summer and I look forward to seeing more as you continue blogging!
I really enjoyed this activity as I was able to read all the creative and unique comic ideas everyone wrote. I found your comic quite interesting as rather than writing speech in the bubbles, you wrote the thoughts or actions the characters were doing. I think your writing fit well with the story as the images and the emotions the people are showing match well with your description of their thoughts/feelings. If you were to write this comic again what would you have them say? Would their words be similar to their feelings or would they say completely different things?
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Kia Ora Susana,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey, it is awesome to see your first post of the summer and I look forward to seeing more as you continue blogging!
I really enjoyed this activity as I was able to read all the creative and unique comic ideas everyone wrote. I found your comic quite interesting as rather than writing speech in the bubbles, you wrote the thoughts or actions the characters were doing. I think your writing fit well with the story as the images and the emotions the people are showing match well with your description of their thoughts/feelings. If you were to write this comic again what would you have them say? Would their words be similar to their feelings or would they say completely different things?
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates